Monday, September 8, 2014

LAST MOVE, by Jesse Shoemaker Drinkwater

They had moved so many times.  At last it seemed they were settled.  Franklin had been their home for five years.  Wade, the fifth son, was born here.  Nice quiet southern town to finish raising the boys.  Jack, the eldest son, married at eighteen, knowing he would soon receive his letter from Uncle Sam.  It was a year coming.  At nineteen, he left a young wife and ten-day-old baby girl behind. 

Those were heart-breaking days, but all wars are so.  Six months later, he was home with a medical discharge.

Eighteen months later, Charles (second son), also married, received his letter.  Three month training at Camp Robinson, Arkansas.  Then off to Japan.  Fear for him walked with the family daily.

Then the war was over, and lumber was to be had.  They would build here and spend the rest of their lives.

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She awoke with the phone ringing with quick, urgent rings several times before she could reach it.  Fear that it might be from the war department went through her mind.

Such a relief when a voice said, “This is Doctor O’Neal your landlord and dentist.”  She must have forgotten an appointment.  Very bluntly he said, “I am selling the house you are renting: do you want to buy it?”

Without thinking how hard houses were to find, she said “no” and hung up the phone.

Looking at the house, there was really nothing wrong with it.  Just was not the house they had planned.  House sold at once of course.  Two months to find a place to live.  It turned into a real nightmare.  Every day they looked, nothing.  Then to the smaller towns close by.  Nothing, always the same answer.  When the war was over, everyone was building.

Time was getting short when the husband said with some hesitation, “I can look over where I am working.  Is about one hundred miles.  You will not like it.  Looks as though we may be compelled to take whatever we can find.”

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At last the call came, “I bought a house today.”   What a relief.  It is rundown but has possibilities, is three miles from town.  Arthur (fourteen) and Donald (eleven) were wild with joy.  They had never lived in the country.

Father said, “Jack and I will start cleaning the place up, after work nights.  I will get some of the furniture moved before you come.  Will make it easier on you and the old folks.”

We packed and waited.  When the truck came, the man in charge said, “Captain said bring all kitchen furniture.”  As they drove away, everyone looked in dismay at the completely empty kitchen.  Four adults, two boys, two babies to feed.

Soon a big truck came for the rest of the furniture, the men told us to take our time as they would place the furniture for us. 
We cleaned the house for the family that would move in that afternoon.  Grandfather had gone with the truck, anxious to see the new home.



Franklin, La. Main Street
Image courtesy of Wikimedia Commons
Ready to go at last, we were rather crowded, but the car was new.  Beautiful spring May day 31, 1946.  No air conditioning in those days.  Windows down, cool wind blowing in our faces, spirits rose, and soon all began to sing.

It was a rather pleasant journey until we drove into the town.  Railroad tracks down the middle of Main Street, stores on each side of the street somehow looked out of place.  Bayou ran through the edge of town, and stores were built along the bayou banks.  A strange looking town, must be very old.  A far cry from the tree lined boulevard that was the main street at Franklin.

Crossing the bayou bridge, driving several blocks, crossed a railroad track and started down a narrow winding gravel road.  A few small houses, then nothing but sugarcane for over a mile.  Then a Plantation store.  A few shacks with small black children playing on steps.  More sugarcane, like a wilderness.

The boys started bickering, the babies cried, the old Grandmother who had Parkinson’s started shaking so hard the woman wondered if she would live to the end of this move.

Suddenly they turned into a narrow drive lined with sycamore trees.  Front yard was so full of tall horse weeds, you would not have noticed the house in passing.  Boys stopped bickering, babies quieted. 
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Art, Faye, Denise & Suzonne in front of the house
in Plaquemine, circa 1959.
No one spoke, just looked.  A run down cypress house, on two acres of land.  In the midst of a cane field.  Quarters about a mile behind.  Weatherboarding falling off, no screens, rickety front steps to porch.  At last Jack looked back and said, “Sorry, Mom.  Was only place Dad could find.”  The woman shivered.  Of all the places, this was the most dreary and lonely she had ever seen.  She could hardly bring herself to believe her husband had bought it.  His judgment was usually so sound.

At last, Donald and his dog jumped from the car, up the steps to the edge of the porch. He looked up and said, “Mom, we have a magnolia tree, and it is blooming.”  The woman sighed and gave a slight smile, we might as well get out.  Carefully they walked up the steps, to the edge of the porch.  Sure enough, hidden by the weeds was a tall magnolia, in full bloom.  Everyone breathed in the sweet fragrance of the flowers.  Two boys raced into the house and as quickly out again.
Yelling, “Mom, come see we have a haunted house!”  Everyone went slowly inside.  Sure enough it looked quite eerie.  Paper put on years before over cheesecloth hung from the ceiling.  On the walls in spots as though something had played hide and seek along them were spots of paper.


Walking into the kitchen was a startling change.  The wainscoting was snow white, the woodwork pale green, new linoleum on floor.   All furniture in place.  Even the teakettle was on the stove.  A cold water faucet stuck out of the wall.
Where was the hot water heater, sink, cabinets?  None.  But the drains and toilet did work.  Also, the water from the faucet was like ice.

In the kitchen circa 1952.

The windows were open and a light breeze blew through. A wasp swung in and out one of the windows, as though questioning who had invaded his domain.

"Sit, Mother."  Gail, Jack, Jesse & Carrie (seated)
The woman pulled a rocker into the kitchen and said, “Sit, Mother.  It is more comfortable in here.  I will make some coffee."  Everyone else was looking here and there.  Quite a large house, rooms all large, ceilings all high, two fire places.  No closets.

The babies were playing contentedly on the cool floor.  The boys started arguing again.­

Waiting for the water to boil, the woman walked to the front porch, looked up a the magnolia again.  Tears suddenly rolled down her face, so tired and yet, must be thankful they had found a place to live.  But could they ever make this a place to be happy in?  Still looking at the tree, the beauty of its white fragrant flowers penetrated her whole being.  She wiped her eyes and spoke to the tree.  “Thank you for being here amidst all these weeds.  I promise we will make this house into a home you will be proud to shade.”

Walking back through the living room, looking at the paper hanging from the ceiling, she felt the house grab at her like a dirty child.  She wanted no part of it.  No choice.  Here they were and somehow would make the most of it.

Larry, Amanda & Faye in front of the fireplace, 1970.
Glancing at the fireplace, she saw through the dust and grime a thing that would be beautiful when cleaned.  Top of the mantel was carved cypress, with round post at outside edges.  In center a large beveled mirror.  Framework at bottom was cypress inlaid with pale green tile, as was the hearth.

She lifted her head.  With a  smile she went into the kitchen. Made coffee and served it, as though she were in exactly the one place she had always wanted to be.  Boys suddenly quiet, looked at her questioningly.  Grandmother smiled.  Daughter-in-law asked for the back bedroom as it was not so spooky.  Woman nodded her head, then spoke to the boys, “Don’t you think you best get to work on those weeds around our tree?  Surely you want everyone passing to see its beauty.” 

Father was much surprised to come home to a smiling family, filled with many suggestions of what could be done to the house.

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Thirty years have passed.  Magnolia can now be proud to shade the house.  A highway passes by, and when sometimes cars slow to admire the house, tree and peafowl strutting in the yard, our minds go back to that first May day we turned into the drive.  As the cars pick up speed, we smile.


--Jesse Shoemaker Drinkwater


for a writing class at LSU 1980, about the move to Plaquemine, Louisiana in May of 1946

Jesse, Linda, Gail, Jackie, David, Gary
Jesse & Faye, December 1955

Gary & Jesse






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